"tuching story"

It's a great story you got there. But... I just saw the movie called "The wrestler" and I feel like you have taken much stuff from that movie. And if you have. I have to give it a 5 because it wouldn't be that original.
But as you said, you have been working with this flash for a long time and maybe you got the idea before the wrestler came out, then il give it a 10.
Il give it a 9 anyway. You lose the last point because of the animation that you could have done something more.

Creepy and beautiful.

I love the animation the ideas of who these creature reflects.
Felt something cold crawl down my neck when I saw these "monsters/humans"
We are just like them.